The world has changed, bombs have destroyed all the surface. There is a lot of radiation in the world, now people live in diferent refuges to protect their lives from the radioactive threat. Just some brave people come out to the surface to find food, ammo, guns, and a lot of resources. Their lives are very very hard at present. My name is Frank, a worker and owner of the barber’s in refuge 76. A team of explorers left 3 days ago and have not come back yet. The boss of the refuge has sent the best soldiers in the refuge, the skull troopers, and I am in this team, god knows what will happen to me.
Posted by: fabiaanrodrigueez | 15/11/2018
Radiation
Posted in Collaborative Writing | Tags: 2018-2019, 3rd year students, fiction
I like your storir because it is different of the others, you don’t write about love or scary stories, it is original
By: luciaalopezzz on 22/11/2018
at 10:24
I love the start. I think it will be pretty interesting writting this story. I will never get tired of this type of series or films.
By: lukhi04 on 22/11/2018
at 10:28
I like this story because it is interesting and original.
By: iagofdez on 22/11/2018
at 10:29
it can be a good story to continue.
By: luisCorral on 22/11/2018
at 10:31
It´s a good story and a good start.
By: antonloopez on 22/11/2018
at 10:31
I don’t like the beginning of this story
By: andrescamu18 on 22/11/2018
at 10:32
It is very interesting and original
By: davisito04 on 22/11/2018
at 10:32
I like this story because I think it’s original, it’s easy to continue and that could hapen in a lot of years.
By: sofiasanmartin on 22/11/2018
at 10:34
I like because is too original,
By: soniavazquezh on 22/11/2018
at 10:35
I do not like your story. It seems like some others. But I think that you can do a good story.
By: rachelrodriguez04 on 22/11/2018
at 10:35
and interesting
By: davisito04 on 23/11/2018
at 11:48