Dear diary: Today was a strange day, I met a girl in my ballet class, she is from Italy, she is so beatiful and so funny, but sometimes she gets angry too fast. Her name is Georgina, she is so so talented… I LOVE HER <3, but she has a boyfriend and I don’t think that she will get interested in me. The way that we met was very funny because we bumped into each other.
- Sorry, it was my fault. My name is Georgina
- No problem. My name is Grace…
I really like your story because it is original.
By: luciaalopezzz on 22/11/2018
at 10:22
The start isn’t very interesting but I will like to know how this love story will end. I think it will be better if you added more dialogue.
By: lukhi04 on 22/11/2018
at 10:26
Another story of love…..
By: fabiaanrodrigueez on 22/11/2018
at 10:26
I don´t like this story because I don´t like the love stories.
By: iagofdez on 22/11/2018
at 10:26
I don’t think it’s an easy story to continue
By: andrescamu18 on 22/11/2018
at 10:28
I think it’s an original story. I like it.
By: luisCorral on 22/11/2018
at 10:28
The story is original but I don´t like these stories.
By: antonloopez on 22/11/2018
at 10:29
This is good because the story is original and interesting
By: davisito04 on 22/11/2018
at 10:31
I don’t like the story because I think the love stories are boring, and this story isn’t interesting.
By: sofiasanmartin on 22/11/2018
at 10:31
Your start is not very interesting but I think your story could improve. By the way, I like the seen point (you tell your story in a diary) because it makes me remember a TV programme that I like so much.
By: rachelrodriguez04 on 22/11/2018
at 10:32
I loved your story, because is cute, but is too cliche.
By: soniavazquezh on 22/11/2018
at 10:33