Everything started when I woke up at five in the morning that day I was feeling bad and I could not sleep anymore. As I could not sleep anymore I went to the shower, and when I was going to get the soap I realized that there was no soap. The worst thing is that when I was going to get out of the shower I fell, nothing was going well an I had a job interview, I was afraid that they would not choose me.
Posted by: andrescamu18 | 15/11/2018
A Bad Day
Posted in Collaborative Writing | Tags: 2018-2019, 3rd year students, fiction
This story is very classic. Althought it’s a good start I won’t like to write an story that already exist.
By: lukhi04 on 22/11/2018
at 10:19
I like your story but i think it could be longer
By: luciaalopezzz on 22/11/2018
at 10:20
I like this story because it is interesting
By: iagofdez on 22/11/2018
at 10:21
I think it’s a good story because it’s very original.
By: luisCorral on 22/11/2018
at 10:21
I don’t like the story because it doesn’t seem realistic to me that a person at five o’clock in the morning goes to take a shower
By: sofiasanmartin on 22/11/2018
at 10:23
It´s a good start for a story and it is interesting.
By: antonloopez on 22/11/2018
at 10:23
Your story is good, I like it because you explain something real and I think it is very important tell a story based on reality. Although I think that your story is not the best because I am not very interested in it.
By: rachelrodriguez04 on 22/11/2018
at 10:23
I don’t like the story because this is very short
By: fabiaanrodrigueez on 22/11/2018
at 10:23
This a good story because you tell the story neatly
By: davisito04 on 22/11/2018
at 10:27
I like this story because is too interesting. But very short too.
By: soniavazquezh on 22/11/2018
at 10:28
That’s very bad luck. I like this story, is very entertaining. I want to know what happens next.
By: Eva Álvarez on 22/11/2018
at 10:31
It’s a funny story, I like it because is very realistic.
By: valentinago19 on 22/11/2018
at 10:33