Posted by: andrescamu18 | 15/11/2018

A Bad Day

Everything started when I woke up at five in the morning that day I was feeling bad and I could not sleep anymore. As I could not sleep anymore I went to the shower, and when I was going to get the soap I realized that there was no soap. The worst thing is that when I was going to get out of the shower I fell, nothing was going well an I had a job interview, I was afraid that they would not choose me.


  1. This story is very classic. Althought it’s a good start I won’t like to write an story that already exist.

  2. I like your story but i think it could be longer

  3. I like this story because it is interesting

  4. I think it’s a good story because it’s very original.

  5. I don’t like the story because it doesn’t seem realistic to me that a person at five o’clock in the morning goes to take a shower

  6. It´s a good start for a story and it is interesting.

  7. Your story is good, I like it because you explain something real and I think it is very important tell a story based on reality. Although I think that your story is not the best because I am not very interested in it.

  8. I don’t like the story because this is very short

  9. This a good story because you tell the story neatly

  10. I like this story because is too interesting. But very short too.

  11. That’s very bad luck. I like this story, is very entertaining. I want to know what happens next.

  12. It’s a funny story, I like it because is very realistic.


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