Last year a group of twelve girls and boys went on a school trip with teachers. One day two of the girls had a bad day because they fell and had to go to the hospital. After that happened they had to leave the trip. The teachers were very sad because they could not continue with the tour. The students called their parents and they stayed two more days with the students. After a few days the students were recovered and then they continued with the trip. After all that had happened they had a great time, they played together, and what is most important they learned new things. This story had a happy end!
Posted by: brendaretazzi98 | 28/10/2013
School trip
Posted in Collaborative Writing | Tags: 2013-2014, 3rd year students, fiction
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I don’t like it very much, because I don’t think it is necessary to stop the trip for two schoolmates.
By: sheilalopesexposito on 05/11/2013
at 11:09
I think this story is a bit sad even though it seems interesting.
By: rociocorbelle98 on 05/11/2013
at 11:26